the deceit, the fraud, and the nature

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the rounding of the curve

the angle of the cornering

there was an imperfection in your stride, a certain swerve

not the ambling of relaxed inhibition, but an intentional resetting of your course

 

the belie-ing of the origin 

and the destination

two points: the from, where you do not live, and the other, where you are going

there is a simple understanding of this plot- the nearest other from, toward which you moved, is not where you returned to after leaving the destination

 

the appearance of formality

and the lack of officiousness 

you are kept, in appearance 

your hair trim, your physique slender- 

your clothing: blue jean and long-sleeve t -but you are not of any organization

 

the wondering 

wandering 

the why of coming and going 

entering and exiting

 

the sadness that geometry has revealed

the revelation of the algebra applied



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  1. ecwthe2ndDecember 16, 2011

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  2. ecwthe2ndDecember 16, 2011

    That's a considerable amount of feedback. I hope You have been voting when You post. I don't have a considerable amount of time to spend on each post, but hopefully soon. Sometimes it's difficult to determine whether it's a critical approach, or a response in fiction/poetic form. Feel free to leave an intro... You know give Me a hint, or something.